Your poster looks so great! I like the new border and callouts. I really don’t have a suggested changes. What about your BW poster though?
I see you went with the movie ticket route, too. I am glad there are differences from mine though. The only thing I would change is there is a lot of text on something so small. Maybe get rid of the date? And other extra stuff that really isn’t needed.
Sara,
I want to commend you on the spacing that you’ve achieved in your poster. I think that you show a lot of information but it doesn’t feel too cluttered or overly full at all to me. That is awesome!
When I saw your poster initially as more of a thumbnail, the color scheme reminded me of army, it has a camouflage feeling to it and all the green plus the font choice took my mind there. I think visually adding in a $ for both amounts in the bottom section might be nice. I also think that giving a clear organization for each section might be nice. Are they ordered a specific way, like one corner is most to least expensive in that section? Or if they’re random, maybe it could be alphabetized?
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Your poster looks so great! I like the new border and callouts. I really don’t have a suggested changes. What about your BW poster though?
I see you went with the movie ticket route, too. I am glad there are differences from mine though. The only thing I would change is there is a lot of text on something so small. Maybe get rid of the date? And other extra stuff that really isn’t needed.
Good luck.
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Sara,
I want to commend you on the spacing that you’ve achieved in your poster. I think that you show a lot of information but it doesn’t feel too cluttered or overly full at all to me. That is awesome!
When I saw your poster initially as more of a thumbnail, the color scheme reminded me of army, it has a camouflage feeling to it and all the green plus the font choice took my mind there. I think visually adding in a $ for both amounts in the bottom section might be nice. I also think that giving a clear organization for each section might be nice. Are they ordered a specific way, like one corner is most to least expensive in that section? Or if they’re random, maybe it could be alphabetized?
I’d love to see your b&w version, good job!
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